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Post by Prudence Halliwell on Nov 10, 2008 15:52:27 GMT -5
You can leave any comments you have for the 3rd episode of Destiny here.
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Post by Rachel on Nov 11, 2008 17:55:17 GMT -5
damn girl, you learnt the cliff hanger parts from me didn't you? I hate them as a reader but love them as a writer. Anyway, I liked the ending. It keeps you guessing why Braden has those powers and this kind of gives continuity into the next episode. I liked the name of the Restaurant, starts with a P and you're right, they fulfilled their Charmed Destinies. Once again, it's cool you center your story around all cousins, and not only on three. I personally couldnt center it around those nine kids cause I most probably would get lost in their own character story lol However, you're doing a good job with it. Keep on. I'm curious though to read more about Prue and Bradon... god, that guy is hot!
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Ashlin
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Post by Ashlin on Nov 15, 2008 1:04:29 GMT -5
Good to see a update. And it was a good update. yep I agree the cliff hanger sucked, lol cause it made me wanting to know how Braden's a Whitelighter now! But yeah, I agree he is hot! And I hope he and Prue become a couple, I like their storylines.
I also agree I like the way you have all 9 Charmed Ones kids in the series. Like instead of the power of 3 like Charmed had, you have the Power of 9. Sam's funny, I like his lines and sense of humor. And also how he and his older sister are always picking at each other in alost every episode. Can't wait for the next episode, hope you update soon!
And the next two episodes sound interesting and good too.
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jess08
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Post by jess08 on Feb 5, 2009 2:10:03 GMT -5
I've read the pilot and this one so far. I will catch up with the other episode tomorrow and review them.
But I liked this episode. I also liked the name of Piper's restaruant. I also think Josh Hartnett is hot so I'm pretty sure I will become a Braden fan lol.
It was sad about his mother, but the way you handled their feelings was pretty good. I also hater the cliff hanger, I hope you update soon I'm interested to see what happens.
I also like the fact you not just center your spin off with only Piper's kids but all 9 of them. The power of 9? Wow, demons don't stand a chance, huh? lol
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Lexi
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Post by Lexi on Feb 21, 2009 12:12:45 GMT -5
I'm not sure why I've only just realised that this episode was up, but I did. I read it straight away and here's my review.
It was great to show the way different people handle grief. We've seen the Halliwells handle with Prue and then get her back but to see how someone outisde of the family handles a death was great. I especially loved the cliffhanger, I wonder if he's somehow inherited his mother's powers now that she's died. It would make sense in a way.
The name for Piper's restaurant was a lovely idea. Not just the fact that Presto means "fullfilled" and you're right, the Charmed Ones have fulfilled their destinies, but also because it starts with a P and it is so different to everything else that I've seen. Very original and that's what I love about your ideas!
Keep up the awesome work, Nic, I love it so much!
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Post by Prudence Halliwell on Feb 23, 2009 1:24:22 GMT -5
Thanks Lexi. And thanks to everyone who reviewed too.
Well, I will give tell you that you will find out soon how Braden got his powers. And I honestly, I didn't really think about the P thing in the name of the restaurant until you just pointed it out, lol. I had just thought to use it cause of the meaning.
I am currently editing the new episode, and I really hope to get it up in the next week.
And also get to reviewing some of your new episodes too, lol. I need a vacation just to do some writing. But when real life calls, you can't put it on hold. And like I said, having a new baby and a husband kind of slows my writing down. But I'm gonna try to do better with the updates!
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Lexi
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Post by Lexi on Feb 23, 2009 16:47:20 GMT -5
Oh no honey, take your time. I'm never going to rush someone or pester them to get an episode up or anything! I know just as well how much life gets in the way of things. I was lucky this christmas that I was so far ahead with writing my episodes because so much happened and if it wasn't for that or going on a winter break, there is no way I would have been able to keep up!
As I was saying, there is no way that I was rushing you to continue and I hope you don't feel that way. x
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