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Post by Rachel on Jan 16, 2008 12:27:13 GMT -5
Alright, I just took the freedom of opening the thread for the review of your 2 nd episode Yeah, you really have some explainings to do with the familiar I'm curious about her and as I said before, I think it's a good idea you have one. Also, what would a witch be without the trouble of being exposed? lol, it's always amusing to see how they get out of troubles. Anyway, hope you upload soon
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lilly
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Post by lilly on Jan 16, 2008 19:50:40 GMT -5
I reviewed the first episode so I'll review this one too. I liked this one so far. It does kinda remind me of the original series. It reminds me of the times when Prue was on the show. I like the little arguement you've put between Prue and Wyatt. I like how close you made the siblings like Elyna put in her review.
Do I suspect Chris is going to have to save both his siblings from evil love interests?
I think its interesting that you put Darryl's son as a character and Henry Jr.'s partner.
Anyway, I'm also curious as to the cat. Can't wait to read more. I like your characters too.
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lexi
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Post by lexi on Jan 19, 2008 1:54:47 GMT -5
This is a good episode too so far. I like that you have Wyatt under a spell by a she demon as Chris called her. Good descriptions with the character feelings.
Its funny you had both Prue and Wyatt fall for demons, maybe they're more alike than they'd care to admit? Henry Jr is an interesting character, plus I love who you chose as his character. He does remind me of both Paige and Henry for some reason.
I like how you add humor just like the Original show did. I can't wait to find out about the familiar too.
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Ashlin
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Post by Ashlin on Jan 25, 2008 1:28:58 GMT -5
I love this episode also. I hate the way you ended it though, with me wondering whats going to happen next!
I love that you put Darryl's son in it too! Its even more cool you made him Samuel's parner. I can't decide which male I like more, Chris or Samuel!
Prue's still my favorite girl though. Anyway, I hope you update soon!
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Post by Rachel on Jan 25, 2008 8:52:18 GMT -5
wow, great update. Wyatt lost his whitelighter powers... and there's something about Prue that will also happen in episode 1x02 - Weren't you a friend? Cool how you make all Blessed Ones work together. Destiny is more focused on all together than just on three of them. I know, it's the same review I did in the other forum lol
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Post by Prudence Halliwell on Jan 29, 2008 0:20:39 GMT -5
I had to put the litle arguing between the siblngs in it too. I mean, they don't always get along either right?
Yeah, I think Destiny is more about how all of them have to work together at times.
Can't wait to find out what will happen with your Prue in Blessed too.
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lilly
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Post by lilly on Jan 30, 2008 1:36:04 GMT -5
I like the way you left the ending. I like what Chris said, it was funny and I think it sounded like something he would say in the show.
I also think its funny that Prue can't control her new power yet, and its landed her in trouble, maybe?
Chris is going to have a lot of work to do to save his bro and sister.
Oh, and Sameul is so funny! I like his lines. I also like the way he and his sister were teasing each other over the resarching. Anyway, hope you update soon.
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Post by Rachel on Jan 30, 2008 11:43:31 GMT -5
"Great, this is just great" XD Nice dry sense of humour of Chris Nice update and again ended it with a cliff hanger. I'm liking Sam always better lol Update soon oh, and thanks for the adding in my review of Blessed here. God, I'll have to upload it this week end here on Destiny XD About Prue... well, wait for the 2nd season
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Post by Prudence Halliwell on Jan 30, 2008 23:22:44 GMT -5
Yeah, like you, I also love to write Chris's dry sense of humor and sarcasm.
Yes, Sam, I'm glad you're liking him more, I hope I can make you become even more fond of him. His lines are also fun to write. I imagine him to have Paige's sense of humor.
We always have to have the cliff hanger, right?
I'm going to try and finish this episode by the end of the week.
Oh, and yeah, like Chris told Prue, she's going to have to learn to control her new power.
You're welcom for the review.
Can't wait for more of Blessed too!
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Post by Rachel on Feb 7, 2008 8:08:07 GMT -5
thanks, what can I say? Closing the manor door in the good old Halliwell tradition. Cool thing. Yeah, I know what you mean, if you're going to make Sam with that dry sense of humor of Paige then it's just like Allen, god I love writing about him. yeah, cliff hangers are are great Destiny 3x01... I'm waiting hehehe
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Post by Lexi on Jun 8, 2008 12:26:48 GMT -5
Ok, so another great episode. I loved the arguments between Wyatt and Prue and the way that Chris was caught in the middle. It definitely wouldn't be a Charmed Spin Off without it. I had a feeling that Wyatt was under a spell though from the start, just the fact that Selena was going to turn out to be a demon. I did like how you brought the cousins back in again and things don't just rest on Wyatt, Chris and Prue's shoulders. At least there was someone else there when Chris had to save both his brother and sister. Poor Chris.
Michael as Sam's partner is a great idea but it would have been good to see him not know about magic and slowly find out, like Darryl did. Trying to find excuses for Sam to leave and save his family would have been interesting, but still, at least Michael can cover for Sam whenever there is a family emergency and the Halliwells have a friend that they can trust.
I loved the fact that there was a familiar, I just wished you hadn't of had her move on. She'd only been in the show for two episodes and the trio didn't official make themselves the power of three until the end of the last episode, so maybe a few more episodes would have been good for her to hang around.
Prue's new power was great, I could picture the look of confusion on her face when she astral projected to P3, just lucky there was only Wyatt there really. Its going to be so fun to watch her try and control that power, especially after her astral projecting herself into a demon's trap, poor Prue.
Anyway, I'll wait for you to fully update episode 3 before I read and review it. I just don't like reading them until their complete.
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